As you begin to read on you are given the weathers description “left behind its feeble breezes, but the heat scorched and smothered them” this shows how hot the country is but with a cool breeze, this creates quite a different affect on the reader because it sets a less mysterious scene to the first line. Near to the end of the first paragraph the word dereliction is used, this means a snse of abandonment is prevailed in the setting as it says “A deathly silence pervades the dereliction as far as the eye can see. his shows quite a mysterious and creepy feeling towards the reader, makes you want to read on because it lures you in with the suspicion and suspense. On the second page the atmosphere is described, creating a shocking effect to the reader which again lures the reader to read on and find out more, the use of decriptive words that are used in such small sentences create a dramatic effect. ” … are of breath of raging battles, rises kabul, or rather whats left of it” this shows a completely different side to Afghanistan to hat we was hereing before. Grabbing the readers attention with detailed description of the way the surroundings look, “Nothing will ever be the same again” this shows a negative feeling that the reader could feel sympathy for the characters involved and this could make the reader want to read on because he/she will want to find out what happens to the characters.
Within this extract there is a lot of horrific imagerey used to describe the charcters surroundings “the ruin of the city walls has spread in to the peoples souls” his is really negative and not quite a pleasant thing to imagine, to me this would pull me into reading the book more because its so strongly written that you can almost imagine every detail in your head, just like your there as one of the characters.
The feelings that this extract causes the reader to feel are mixed emotions mostly quite disturbing and negative but definitely grabs the reader to read on, makes you want to keep reading because it snatches the reader from all distractions keepiing them directly focused on whats going to appen next. There is a lot of nature referrances in this extract which could get the attention of a reader who for example like nature.
In my opinion this extract s very good at grabbing the readers attention through descriptive language, It sets the scene and describes almost every detail about what happening around the characters. This would be so interesting to read because you can imagine yourself being there, feeling exactly what every character feels and sees.